Can Anyone Restore Jim Duncan of Aberdeenshire please?

[ryan37]

This is a man who survived the "Comfort" ( ex Fishing Vessel) Disaster at Dunkirk , My wifes Grandfathers family Benjie Noble of Fraserburgh previously owned the vessel comfort before deployed for war service , the vessel was mistaken for what she was and sank, this man was one of the few survivors ,


if anyone could make this one look better it would be greatly appreciated by many

ryan

[Trishanne]

Hi Ryan, a great story, here's one from me
Pat

[DrDude45]

Here's my initial offering. Hope you enjoy

[ryan37]

Thanks folks

Great work , an amazing improvement I appreciate your kind help


Thanks

[DrDude45]

A quick color version as well.

[ryan37]

Great addition thanks very much for your excellent work

I appreciate your time and effort

Ryan

[loord74]

My Try
Rami

[ryan37]

A great addition thank you very much for your help

I appreciate your excellent work , time and effort

Ryan

[Treetotal]

Hi Ryan. One from me too.
Carol