Can this be improved please......

[F.H.]

Hi all.

Can some cleaver person or persons improve this for me please.   

Many thanks,
F H
 

[little meg]

here is a quick restore from me.
I am sure there will plenty more to come

Margaret

[bluedooo]

Another version from me FH. The original is not quite sharp enough to make any great improvements.  I've removed the surface damage.
Regards Tom

[Niksmum]

and one from me

Irene

[g a r]

and another