Hi Robert,
Thank you for your comments & your observation about Greenstonhill, which differs ever so slightly from the 'Greenstone Hill' that is written in other versions of the 1503 document, this is a very good point!
I think that that is one good example of how a story can evolve and change incrementally as it is passed on from person to person, also perhaps with the language being modernised as it is passed down from generation to generation.
Example:
The word 'Tocsin', as used in the document (Tocsin originated from France in the 1580s) is not one that the Brothers could have used, the likely old Scots terminology would have been 'put to the horn':
ref.
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/put_to_the_hornVerb - Put to the horn (Scotland, transitive, law, historical) To outlaw (a person) by three blasts of the horn at the Cross of Edinburgh.
Similarly, I'm pretty sure that in the 1500s, a desperate bunch of Scottish outlaws would not have used such flowery phraseology as:
"We took shelter under the shadow of the Ochil Hills in a lonely valley on the River Devon.....
..under the ope of the Ochils, and wish the name of Drysdale to flourish in the lonely valley"
Scenario - The hypothetical life of the story (based on the text printed in the Dunfermline press):
Initially, the 1503 story would have been known to the 3 Douglas Brothers and, if recorded by one of them, would have been written down in the old scots language of that time (see Johnston of Greenhill image in post above for an example of old scots language) alternatively the story could have been passed on verbally:
In 1620 it is said that Simon Drysdale of Dollar was the first to copy the story
Then Robert Drysdale of Tillicoultry copied it in 1708
Then John Drysdale of Dunfermline copied it in 1835
Then James Drysdale of Dunfermline copied it in 1838
Then John Drysdale of Montrose copied it in 1841
Then George Drysdale of Aberdeen copied it in 1845
and finally David Drysdale of Glasgow copied it in 1857
As can be seen from the above, the document/story has gone through a sufficient number of stages, in its' 5 century life, for it to have had the possibility of changing & evolving significantly from its original form!
Regards