Royal Navy Record help please

[mackaa]

I need some help deciphering parts of this Royal Navy record please.  This is what I have got so far
Joseph JONES – born 25 March 1905, Cwmaman, Glam (Glamorgam) – occupation Collier
Enlisted 11 Dec 1923 for 12 years – Age F.E. – Height 5’6” – chest 34.5” – hair Brown – eyes Blue – Complexion Fresh – Scars over both eyes & palm ??
Victory II - – 11 Dec 23 - ? – 31.12.23 - ? Passed ?
Victory II - – 23 Sep ? – 31 Oct 24 – VG – 31.12.24 - ?
Weymouth – 12th – 10 ? 1 Nov 24 – 31 Dec 24 - ? – 31.12.25 - ? - ??
Carlisle – 5th - ? - ? – 1 Jan 25 - ? - ? - ? – E – Passed Eden? Test
Victory II – 15th – 4999 - ? – 22 May? 27 – 30 Aug 27 - ? 31.12.16 – Sat?
– I am not doing well on this line
Victory II – 15 – 5404 – 12 Jun ? – 20 Feb ? - ? - ? - ? – Colour 3 yrs 11.12.26
? (RAF London) - ? – 78 - ? – 21 Feb ? – 31 May ? - ?
Victory II - ? - ? _ ?  - ? Jun ? – 27 Aug 28 – NZN (New Zealand Navy) – agreement 3 years from 25/8/28
Diomede - ? - ? - ? – 28 Aug 28

In the middle of the page on right hand side there is also a comment I would like to read –
March 1926 - ? ? ? ? ? involved in the ‘Taku Incident”

Thanks for all your help
Melanie

[ShaunJ]

So many gaps - we'll need to do this in chunks!

In the middle of the page on right hand side there is also a comment I would like to read –
March 1926 - ? ? ? ? ? involved in the ‘Taku Incident”

March 1926 - HMS Carlisle and HMS Foxtrot involved in the "Taku Incident".

"Foxtrot" should perhaps be Foxglove

https://discovery.nationalarchives.gov.uk/details/r/C4783355?descriptiontype=Full&ref=ADM+1/8703/165

[ShaunJ]

?? – I am not doing well on this line

Victoria & Albert Sto 1 (Stoker 1st Class) 31 Aug 27 to 11 Jan 28 VG 31.12.27

[ShaunJ]

? (RAF London) - ? – 78 - ? – 21 Feb ? – 31 May ? - ?

Engagement (?) RAF Leuchars 21 Feb 28 to 31 May 28

[mackaa]

Sorry about the emojis I didn't mean them to be in there

Thanks so much for your help so far Shaun.  I am happy with chunks!! 

[mackaa]

So thanks to Shaun I have worked out all the dates  under "period of service" and the names of ships and places of service. Obviously I would like to read all of the document but as you have guessed this is not my forte. 
So can anyone tell me the headings in columns 3 and 4 ie between Ships and Rating?  I am trying to work out how important this information is in building a picture of Joseph's service.  I would also like to try and work out the last four columns if possible.  I know the middle heading under character & ability reads date and the last column reads remarks but what are the headings of the other two under character and ability.  Hopefully someone is more familiar with Navy Records than I am.

Thanks again

[Karen McDonald]

So can anyone tell me the headings in columns 3 and 4 ie between Ships and Rating?

Hi,

In other examples I found online, the 2 columns are headed "List" and "No." (in the ship's books).

EDIT: On another record I found online, the other 2 columns you mention are "C" and "A". I'm afraid I have no idea what these stand for. Let's hope an expert comes along... 

Best regards,
Karen